My 5 Month Baby Is Horse Should I Take Her To The Er Help With Autobiography Grammer?

Help with autobiography grammer? - my 5 month baby is horse should i take her to the er

I have to write an autobiography about my 5 years, because it is a student of the week. I'm not very good with my grammar, so I asked if someone could help. She also asked if there is anything I can add or delete?

For your privacy, I am using false names and school name. :)

My name is Jane Doe May I was born in August 2003 5 in Fresno, California. We moved to Madera when he 7 months. I live with my sister, Lisa, Bart, my brother, my mother, my father and my grandmother.
My mother has always told everybody I was the sweetest cutest baby I've ever seen. I am now 5 and still make me laugh all the time. I am a Kindergartner at Wood Elementary School. I like to go to school and play with all my friends. When not at schoolI love drawing and coloring.
My favorite animal is a dinosaur, but I also like horses, parrots and cats.
When I grow up I want to be a fireman, a mailman and a mother. I live in a big house, so they are used by many animals.